Monday, November 5

time is like sand
it slips out of the hand
whilst one waits for the
right time
pity.....
this only time teaches
once it is gone

5 comments:

iamnasra said...

How I missed slowing down..as I was merely a sand sliping out tube of time ...

It felt that way for weeks...I missed being what was to me a routine..Thank you for your visit and your words of support .. It had gave a rope to cling on while falling within myslef ..

How true, some words meant to be read when the time is right ..or its meant to be heard

Jac said...

I needed this words.
Thanks.

wildflower said...

time's like sand
the tighter you hold on to it..
the faster it slips out of your hands...

but we need to learn lots of things..dun we?
There is some kind of charm that is in learning by actually literally doing the mistakes :( :)//nevermind!
that's the way life is...
and now i think my comment has exceeded your short & yet so profound poem...So lets wind up !

zzz-writer said...

thank you all for the comments.
these are not even fluke attempts towards poetry but a self reminder that was published

dintoons said...

well, your "fluke attempts" are certainly most charming and heart-tugging ;o)